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Thursday, 18 August 2016

peom

         cheetah
If i were a cheetah i would run like the wind.
If i were a cheetah you will get pinned.
If i were a cheetah i will catch the deer.
If i were a cheetah my prey will show
Fear.
If i were a cheetah i will be scared .


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  1. Anonymous4 November 2016 at 10:04

    Hello Kelly,
    I really like your poem and how you said what you would do if you were a Cheetah. One thing you need to work on is your capital letters, you need to capitalise the 'I's'. I see that your title up the top is 'peom' instead of poem; Maybe you would like to edit that.

    Thanks,
    Ariana.

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